omg this is actually amazing! You have such amazing characterisation, and each of them coming to their own and playing to their unique niche in the OT4. Ignis interacting with Gladio is very different from him interacting with Prompto and again just as different as Noct, but they're all absolutely spot on. It's so rare to find someone writing all of them half as well as this <3<3<3
... Okay, I'm scrolling up to c&p my favourite lines, but seriously, I had to stop because it was just all of them. The way Ignis thinks is perfect – he's very aware of himself, very self-critical, very quick to jump on his own mistakes. But he's also so, so loving of the others, and he knows exactly why he loves them, and it feels so real.
"The one on the counter or the one taking liberties he should know better than to take?"
OMG Ignis that BURN. I said I wouldn't c&p lines but that one was just too perfect. Ignis and Gladio's to-and-fro is AMAZING, so quick witted without being excessive, so natural.
And then Noct, omg. OMG, nonnie. It would be easy to say he's becoming aroused against his will, but it is not against Noct's will and so he cannot say it is truly against his own. Ignis has just completely given himself to Noct and it's such a freaking stunning dynamic. Reading it is like sinking into one of those giant bathtubs full of it – you don't really smack the reader round the face with it explicitly but the D/s dymanic is there, surrounding you. And Ignis is so, so, so adoringly loving, and Noct is so tender and compassionate and dominant – dead, I am dead. Fuck me sideways, nonnie. This was a simple prompt but you've expanded it into real depth and beauty and I just want to roll around in it forever. All of the damn love <3<3<3 I absolutely cannot wait for the next part.
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Re: FILL: (2/4) OT4, D/s, Ignis naked except an apron
Date: 2018-03-26 08:33 pm (UTC)... Okay, I'm scrolling up to c&p my favourite lines, but seriously, I had to stop because it was just all of them. The way Ignis thinks is perfect – he's very aware of himself, very self-critical, very quick to jump on his own mistakes. But he's also so, so loving of the others, and he knows exactly why he loves them, and it feels so real.
"The one on the counter or the one taking liberties he should know better than to take?"
OMG Ignis that BURN. I said I wouldn't c&p lines but that one was just too perfect. Ignis and Gladio's to-and-fro is AMAZING, so quick witted without being excessive, so natural.
And then Noct, omg. OMG, nonnie. It would be easy to say he's becoming aroused against his will, but it is not against Noct's will and so he cannot say it is truly against his own. Ignis has just completely given himself to Noct and it's such a freaking stunning dynamic. Reading it is like sinking into one of those giant bathtubs full of it – you don't really smack the reader round the face with it explicitly but the D/s dymanic is there, surrounding you. And Ignis is so, so, so adoringly loving, and Noct is so tender and compassionate and dominant – dead, I am dead. Fuck me sideways, nonnie. This was a simple prompt but you've expanded it into real depth and beauty and I just want to roll around in it forever. All of the damn love <3<3<3 I absolutely cannot wait for the next part.